I love this story. It is different and refreshing. Thank you for the opportunity to read it.
A wonderful story. A unique voice. Thanks.
Well done, Olga! The piece pops out as if it were simply a true fact, not something made up at all.
I think it must be a true story! Very touching, authentic, and familiar.
Great narrative, Olga! "The room grew quiet, as if God was holding his breath," speaks to the power of silence and the presence of spirits.
This reads as if you were familiar with the characters. Good way to write, firsthand experience.