There is nothing more exciting than to be in the hands of a confident, lyrical, and insightful storyteller. You see and feel his world as if you are living inside it.
This was great. I agree that the apathetic nature of the narrator is balanced well with the depth of observations. The perspective really adds three-dimensional melancholy to the character. Looking forward to reading more of Chris's work.
There is nothing more exciting than to be in the hands of a confident, lyrical, and insightful storyteller. You see and feel his world as if you are living inside it.
Excellent. Congratulations.
This was a visual feast and an emotionally internal tale that I cherished like the first sip of a new fruity wine! Awesome.
Totally wonderful. I love your writing, and I wish you much success.
The sense of dullness felt by the character is well balanced by the richness of his observations.
Great story! Good luck to you!
This tale reads like notes from a diary. I just hope nobody is actually going through such an experience during this devastating economic crisis.
This was great. I agree that the apathetic nature of the narrator is balanced well with the depth of observations. The perspective really adds three-dimensional melancholy to the character. Looking forward to reading more of Chris's work.