Nice innocent voice. . . I found myself pleased that the story proceeded and concluded without hinging on some stereotypical "white trash" foible of the father. "Bo" could be extended into a longer, more developed story.
I want to meet these people; it was easy to forget I was reading a story; I felt like I was with them in the camp. It is one of the most visually descriptive stories I have read with characters so subtle they became real.
Nice innocent voice. . . I found myself pleased that the story proceeded and concluded without hinging on some stereotypical "white trash" foible of the father. "Bo" could be extended into a longer, more developed story.
Descriptively simple and beautifully written.
Lyrical and lovely!
Beautiful story. The maturity and innocence of the narrator made it real.
Sensorial.
Excellent story. I felt like I was there with Bo. Beautiful and tender voice.
I really enjoyed this.
Parallels Steinbeck's short stories. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
I want to meet these people; it was easy to forget I was reading a story; I felt like I was with them in the camp. It is one of the most visually descriptive stories I have read with characters so subtle they became real.
Well-written great short story.
Sincerely touching. Vivid and moving.