by Ladan Osman

Nicely done, Ladan. Congratulations.

A beautiful poem, I especially loved the images and the flow (of the water).

I love the use of imagery, the diction, the abstract nature of the poem, the evocative impact the poem has on the reader . . . brilliant!

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