by Daria-Ann Martineau
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Potent. Thank you, Daria-Ann.

Thank you so much, Wendy. It means a lot to have this kind of support and appreciation for my poem.

Splendid, splendid and poignant poem. Bravo. Made my day.

Such a visceral and haunting poem. Beautifully done.

So much said in so few words, so much emotion spent. Beautiful work.

Wonderful, gut-wrenching, beautiful poem, Daria-Ann. I've read it three times just now, and I'm going to make it four. Thank you!

Amazing poem. The last lines were surprising and said so much in few words. You have a gift and I will read it again and again.

This poem has everything. It's so finished. I wonder if it changed course during the writing. It has the feel of a poem that knew what it wanted to be from the start.

The last line wouldn't let go of me. Agonizing in so many ways. Thank you.