This is so powerful. I came back to read it a second time. Thank you for sharing your experiences and helping us see them through your eyes.
I'm especially taken with the use of space here.
You are a poet, sir. Enough said.
Reading poems like this when I served in 1969 helped me realize that I was not cut out for soldiering. Thanks for the clarity of your experience.
This is so powerful. I came back to read it a second time. Thank you for sharing your experiences and helping us see them through your eyes.
I'm especially taken with the use of space here.
You are a poet, sir. Enough said.
Reading poems like this when I served in 1969 helped me realize that I was not cut out for soldiering. Thanks for the clarity of your experience.