#549. Why Do Drops of Water Flatten and Disappear after a Time?

by Anastasia Stelse
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I like the imagery of bodies touching and a bit of the wild sensations and mental explorations experienced.

The lines I keep going back to are the ones about the repulsion of water and wood. What I get from this is like a sea burial. Someone being set adrift in a coffin. I do enjoy the word play and use of language. The spacing makes me think of people in water. Speak a few words . . . kick a few times . . . speak a few more words . . .