This was an amazing story of young people, of people who do not fit in, and the ending really surprised me. The descriptions of the nights and the candies and the foods was amazing and I love the friendship between the two main characters. Thank you for writing this story A.T. Steel. Very powerful.
Annthea Whittaker replied on Mon, 03/09/2026 - 01:56am
I’m blown away . . . speechless. This story touched me in places I never imagined. What talent!
This story was amazing and it does have a James Baldwin vibe.
I haven't been this affected by a story in a very long time. Bravo, A.T. Steel, and thank you, Narrative, for bringing it.
This was an amazing story of young people, of people who do not fit in, and the ending really surprised me. The descriptions of the nights and the candies and the foods was amazing and I love the friendship between the two main characters. Thank you for writing this story A.T. Steel. Very powerful.