You’d Be Thirty Today

by Lo Naylor
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Wow. Just wow.

Donette Plaisance replied on Mon, 09/01/2025 - 11:07am

& I thought about atoms in endless motion,
their performance of permanence...

and that last couplet.

Stunning.

Leslie Kirk Campbell replied on Mon, 09/01/2025 - 02:06pm

Very heart warming. Could take the reader down the lane to live up to similar experiences.

Neeta Mohla replied on Tue, 09/02/2025 - 12:30am
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