A Short Short Story

by T. L. Crum
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Perfectly rendered and emotionally powerful, but oh how I wish it were just the beginning of a longer story.

"Magnolia" is really intriguing. I would love to see it expanded!

Painful as it is, I think "Magnolia" is the perfect length. Form mirrors content, and what a sense of perfection, completion, and, yes, a desire for more. All around this gem, there are reverberations. This is exactly what we need to feel.

Beautiful, sad, and touching.

This must be what it feels like. A wonderful story!