Wow, Mr. Bob Hicock, your poem is an impressive tour de force! I especially like your masterful shifts of tense, incorporating previous lines. It's not technique that moves me, though, it's tone and content. Thanks.
This is absolutely gorgeous. The current just keeps going and going in the best way possible. Thank you for carrying me away! Thank you for those images, for this sincerity, for this!
This poem leaves me speechless. Beautiful. The imagery is of this world.
This poem is deeply moving. You are a poet extraordinaire, Bob. Thank you.