I wasn't crazy about the setting and I don't like reading about losers, so felt no empathy towards any of them, however, I really liked the tempo of the story.
One of the best pieces I've read in a long time and one of the reasons I love Narrative.
I loved this story. The details and setting were very compelling and well-drawn.
This was fantastic. Truly.
I was drawn into the picture of an actual carnival, great detailing with the setting.
Beautiful and haunting.