Aim High Olongapo

A Story

by Matt Pavelich
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A well crafted story and an enjoyable read. It also captures the military life well. The story reminds me of my brother's experiences in the army taking orders from fools.

Insightful and inspiring. I liked the rhythm, the contrast in world views, and most of all the character sketches so quickly and seemingly easily done that brought to life a variety of personalities with few words.