Keeping Up

by Jay Deshpande

I liked this piece a lot, especially when each Kardashian whispered "intimate" thoughts to the camera inside her lover.

Just brilliant!

This is one of the best pieces I've read in a while.

I keep coming back to reread this piece to enjoy the critique and the accompanying wariness of the reified seduction being described. Nicely developed, Jay.

This is wonderful, a fantasy poem which is a genre I just discovered.


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