A Six-Word Story

by Marlon Jiminez
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Congratulations on your first publication. Really liked it. So much is said in only six words. It speaks of love. Is there anticipation there or the bond of trust?


How well I remember this feeling. Oh! The anguish, the longing, the pure joy, the pain.
Excellent piece . . . so many layered meanings/interpretations.

A wonderful achievement--it's such a simple concept but yes, it speaks volumes. I hope you have plenty more where that came from!

It's a perfect little story.

Oh, to just be . . . in her close presence.

Wow. I agree with poster above. Perfect little story.