It Was Yoked to a Black Hunger

by Dana Levin

Eeeek, if you think ravens are heartless, try eating some crow. Very well written, clean, and to the point. Reminds me of how the Republicans are treating Obama care. Anyway, the contrast of red to black imagery is good, and the sense of detail makes it hit the mind like a snowball to the head.

I love the image of a skate on a groove of air.

Thank you, Robert and Wendy!


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