White Moon Rising

A Story

by Tess Callahan

Good use of specific detail to create visuals. I was there on the boat as it pitched. Well done. I want to know what happens. Will they meet again--or was she just a girl on a boat?

Took me back to this past summer's adventure--being in a small sailboat in a substantial gale on Georgia Strait--my first of experience of feeling mauled by the mindless power of the sea.


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