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Wow. I can't withhold the way this story surprised me from beginning to end. I was catching my breath at nearly every shift in scene. Powerful, epic short-short--a tiny engraving of a vast scene, meticulously and artfully achieved.
Exquisitely written. I was very moved by this piece. Bravo!
This is wonderful. The last line packs one hell of a punch.
Poignant and well constructed. The pathos of that last line--Thank you!