A Novel Excerpt

by Adrianne Harun
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I love this story: the strongly illuminated scenes, the bold characters, the velvet writing, the overwhelming sense of reality. Looking forward to reading the novel. Thanks.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Adrianne has now convinced me that those who say I should shorten my sentences when I write miss the compelling effect long sentences have on the reader. It keeps the "rush" the writer has provided propelled forward, ever moving, ready for the drop as if filipendulous. You're exhausted and happy after you land.

Thanks, Adrianne!