Water of Life

A Story

by Rachel Vogel

WOW! What a commanding story! I was disappointed that it ended! I wanted to know more about the tall lanky fellow who was from money and the girl who's motives seemed to shift over in a short span of time. Great read!

Beautifully detailed, I loved this evocative story. Wonderful work Rachel.

Very nice. Pulled me in quickly. Felt her anxiety in the professor's apartment. Worried about her. Relieved when they headed out into the snow. The quick ending surprised me, but made me smile. Yes, what a story that would be to share about their first evening.

Sweet and satisfying. Your story delivers.


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