Hop-On Hop-Off

A Story

by Manikya Veena

Brilliant short story. Follows Kurt Vonnegut's "rules" for writing a short story; not an easy task. I look forward to Ms. Veena's next story.

This is a moving story. The ending was like the affair between the characters -- sudden, swift, and decisive. And, like the affair, it left me wanting more.

What a fine, fresh, vigorous story!


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