I think I only took one breath, start to finish. So much intensity and sorrow. Brilliant. I am seduced by the language, for what it carries, but also for its economy and fire and the beautiful control.
Sandra Scofield replied on Sun, 07/26/2020 - 02:48pm
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This is excellent writing. Composition was engaging and quite a twist to the story. Good job.
I think I only took one breath, start to finish. So much intensity and sorrow. Brilliant. I am seduced by the language, for what it carries, but also for its economy and fire and the beautiful control.
Some stories stay with you for days, a lingering to savor for days on end.