To This God I Will Say

A Short Short Story

by Tryphena L. Yeboah

This is excellent writing. Composition was engaging and quite a twist to the story. Good job.

I think I only took one breath, start to finish. So much intensity and sorrow. Brilliant. I am seduced by the language, for what it carries, but also for its economy and fire and the beautiful control.

Some stories stay with you for days, a lingering to savor for days on end.

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