Ergonomy: Part 3

A Novella Serialization

by Leo Goodyear
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This story is great BUT it's reminding me of my mother's behavior and that makes me squirm. The lead character makes me want to shake her, hard. I want to scream at her to grow up and stop being so selfish. Finally, I also want her to be okay.

Awesome story, wish it was longer!

Fantastic dialogue. Great imagery. I only hope that I can write this well some day in the future. Way to go.