Faith was very believable as a character — her dialogue, inferences, and actions. I loved the imagery of the narrator cradling the mummified babe. Fascinating story!
Beautiful story, Maryanne. Very moving in how it blended fantasy with reality. A healthy sense of fantasy helps us deal with reality, but eventually must be let go.
Christine Venzon replied on Mon, 03/24/2025 - 01:51am
Faith was very believable as a character — her dialogue, inferences, and actions. I loved the imagery of the narrator cradling the mummified babe. Fascinating story!
Beautiful story, Maryanne. Very moving in how it blended fantasy with reality. A healthy sense of fantasy helps us deal with reality, but eventually must be let go.
Well crafted, well written, well done! Such a nuanced story in a compact space. I still have a bit of the shivers. Kudos.