Ellie

A Story

by Liesl Wilke

I really enjoyed this piece. It's packed with yeah-I-know-that-feeling moments. I knew when I read "bath crap" in the first line that this would be good.

An excellent and enjoyable story. I could really feel the main character as I was reading it.

I agree with Scott, the term "bath crap" made me smile.

The author replaces the post coital bliss cliche with the character's genuine uncertainty and ambivalence. A delicate matter nicely handled by the author.

A lot of great lines in this story. It's nice that the level of uncertainty is shared between both characters. Ellie's unwillingness to see any of the encounter as innocent, or even positive, feels so accurately collegiate. I want to read Circle of Three.


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