Loved the story and the author's writing skill, sense of good humor, and positive attitude. Bet it won't take long for Mary Shannon to find Mister Right.
It was engaging for she put me right there with her in how she was thinking and feeling. The topics and subject matter of online dating and May-December romance made it intriguing.
Mark Hashizume replied on Sat, 01/24/2009 - 08:11am
In the end, an uplifting story of hope--that most wonderful of qualities one can have. The kiss description was itself a wonderful kiss; memorable. She told her story with clarity but left us wondering what went wrong. Perhaps we'll see another installment?
Dave Danielson replied on Sun, 02/01/2009 - 09:19am
The last time I saw Mary was in Tuscany in 2006. It looks like our time spent together at a writer's conference served her well. Congratulations Mary on a finely crafted piece!
Debra K. McCall replied on Wed, 02/04/2009 - 07:36pm
Loved the story and the author's writing skill, sense of good humor, and positive attitude. Bet it won't take long for Mary Shannon to find Mister Right.
It was engaging for she put me right there with her in how she was thinking and feeling. The topics and subject matter of online dating and May-December romance made it intriguing.
Very lovely story, Mary. I was right there with you every bit of the way. Beautifully told and generously shared. Thank you.
Your story moved me. It is well written and has a passion to it I have rarely seen. You left me wanting more!
Very much enjoyed your very well told story!
I very much enjoyed reading Mary Shannon's contribution. She writes well, holds my interest, and makes me smile!
In the end, an uplifting story of hope--that most wonderful of qualities one can have. The kiss description was itself a wonderful kiss; memorable. She told her story with clarity but left us wondering what went wrong. Perhaps we'll see another installment?
Very cute story; I enjoyed it!
The last time I saw Mary was in Tuscany in 2006. It looks like our time spent together at a writer's conference served her well. Congratulations Mary on a finely crafted piece!
Here's a cute coming of age story with a twist. It's funny and sad, but hopeful.
Way to fly Falconette! Great landing.
I very much enjoyed reading Mary Shannon's contribution. She writes well, holds my interest, and makes me smile!