A Story

by Elmo Lum

Thank you, Elmo, for this absolutely stunning story. I felt so close to the two characters, as if I was in the back-seat, third-wheeling, just coasting along as their friendship, passion and love grew. There are so many beautiful things in this story, the language, the words, the scenery. Road trips make people high on life, and your story was a neat trip too.

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