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Wonderfully written. A great memoir.
I like the vivid detail and fear you made me feel I kept thinking the narrator was going to be stopped any moment. Hope to hear from you again.
An original story with a poetic ending. I didn't want it to end.
Joy, Kossiwa, and Tamera,
Wow, what wonderful input. This will give me new energy in putting my book together and I'll keep submitting to Narrative, so if they'll have me, I'll be back.
Unfortunately, publication takes time. You can visit my website and click on "More About William" in the lower right to reach a blog with a couple more fragments that may be included in the book.
Thanks so very much for your encouraging comments! Wishing you a rewarding 2011!