Atomic Facts

A Story

by Tom Grimes

The staccato replies coupled with a dialogue that lends an aura of immediacy sets the perfect tone for the relentless, existential questioning by the protagonist, but left me wondering . . . with a more indirect presentation, one less architecturally spare, I think one man's personal dilemma might have been more easily understood as our own.

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