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Susan Kinsolving is the author of the poetry collections The White Eyelash; Dailies & Rushes; Among Flowers; and My Glass Eye. Glimmerglass Opera commissioned her to write lyrics for a cantata entitled Constellations, and several of her poems have been set to music and performed in the United States and abroad. A recipient of the Poetry Society of America’s 2009 Lyric Award, Kinsolving has served as poet in residence at the Hotchkiss School in Connecticut.

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Commingling

by Susan Kinsolving
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As directed, Mother’s ashes were released
into Lake Michigan. Fresh water, no salt tears,
and a continent between her ashes and Father’s,

which she had “scattered” six years before
into the Pacific. For him, she was asked to sign
a release not to bring suit in case commingling
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